Dargquon Ql'deleodna

"Oh, yeah. We'll have to ditch the wagons bout half way. We can come back for them when we're ready to leave again" the strange, seemingly uncoordinated, blonde man spoke, ...

Freaking Amazing Mate. -DQ

"Ria, Stillman; tie him up." Alden said ignoring everyone's surprise So he is alive after all, something different about him though. Sirloaz thought as he watched Alden. I'm not sure ...

Congrats!

Oh, cool; but still, how does YWS recognize what is a review and what isn't? *thats kind of what i was trying to get at*

This is cool, but how do you know how many reviews they have done?

sorry people, i've got finals and have been studying; haven't had much time for anything.

"So, how have you two been" Sirloaz said leaning back as Joanne advanced on him. "Shut Up!" Joanne yelled backhanding Sirloaz, whilst he trembled in anger and fear. Becky and ...

I try to critique whenever i get on YWS, i just don't have a lot of time to contribute. Yet what time i do have it's spent on critiquing (usually).

Sounds great to me.

10 fully armed soldiers marched down the steps, their Shining green and silver armor reflected the flickering torches along the dungeons spiraling stone staircase. Upon reaching the last few doors ...

Um... what's going to happen to Sirloaz?

"Oy! Banite!" A short gruff guard barked, kicking the chained figure awake. "Bastard" the figure said lifting its head of its chest glaring at the man with cloudy eyes, yet ...

I'll break out of prison... on the outskirts of a town (in which some other characters might be, just lying low). or be broken out of prison. whichever works.

Name:Sirloaz Tranleen / Zaolris Race:Human (demon soul sealed inside him) Age:28 Nationality:Unknown Eye Color: One Blue (right) and one Black (left) (when possessed clouded over) Height: 5'11" Occupa